[Nml-wg] Soliciting Public Comments on "Network topology descriptions in hybrid networks"

[Freek Dijkstra]

Paola Grosso wrote:

>> I leave it up to Paola Grosso, the editor, to decide.
>>   
> I will make a new version of the document.
> I will send it to Maciej to see that I actually have correctly updated
> the text, and to you and Martin (as co-chairs).

I just changed the text and uploaded it to
http://forge.gridforum.org/sf/docman/do/viewDocument/projects.nml-wg/docman.root.drafts/doc14679/12?_message=1266227439444

(My apology for overstepping my bounds, since you are the editor, not
me. However, I just wanted to get this out).

Maciej, Paola, can you verify these changes are correct?

These were my changes:

End of 4.1:

Was:

> The success of cNIS depends upon the efficiency of automatic data
> collection, population and verification. A plug-in architecture for
> this is currently under development.

Becomes:

> The success of cNIS depends upon the efficiency of automatic data
> collection, population and verification. cNIS has plug-ins to collect
> IP, Ethernet and SDH topology information. Plug-ins are continuously
> improved and user have the possibility to develop their own plug-ins.

Start of 4.4:

Was:
> cNIS provides two different types of programmatic interfaces (API):
> • A management interface for system users to perform various
>   administrative tasks and visualization.
> • An operational interface for external applications.

Becomes:

> cNIS provides one graphic user interface (GUI) and three different
> types of programmatic interfaces (API):
> • One graphical user interface, the cNIS manager application to 
>   perform administrative tasks and visualization;
> • Three web service interfaces (topology service, AutoBAHN service 
>   and pathfinder) to access the cNIS data repository.

Regards,
Freek