[Nml-wg] Soliciting Public Comments on "Network topology descriptions in hybrid networks"

[Maciej Łabędzki]

It's OK. Thank you.

regards,
Maciej

W dniu 2010-02-15 10:58, Freek Dijkstra pisze:
> Paola Grosso wrote:
>
>>> I leave it up to Paola Grosso, the editor, to decide.
>>>
>> I will make a new version of the document.
>> I will send it to Maciej to see that I actually have correctly updated
>> the text, and to you and Martin (as co-chairs).
>
> I just changed the text and uploaded it to
> http://forge.gridforum.org/sf/docman/do/viewDocument/projects.nml-wg/docman.root.drafts/doc14679/12?_message=1266227439444
>
> (My apology for overstepping my bounds, since you are the editor, not
> me. However, I just wanted to get this out).
>
> Maciej, Paola, can you verify these changes are correct?
>
> These were my changes:
>
> End of 4.1:
>
> Was:
>
>> The success of cNIS depends upon the efficiency of automatic data
>> collection, population and verification. A plug-in architecture for
>> this is currently under development.
>
> Becomes:
>
>> The success of cNIS depends upon the efficiency of automatic data
>> collection, population and verification. cNIS has plug-ins to collect
>> IP, Ethernet and SDH topology information. Plug-ins are continuously
>> improved and user have the possibility to develop their own plug-ins.
>
> Start of 4.4:
>
> Was:
>> cNIS provides two different types of programmatic interfaces (API):
>> • A management interface for system users to perform various
>>    administrative tasks and visualization.
>> • An operational interface for external applications.
>
> Becomes:
>
>> cNIS provides one graphic user interface (GUI) and three different
>> types of programmatic interfaces (API):
>> • One graphical user interface, the cNIS manager application to
>>    perform administrative tasks and visualization;
>> • Three web service interfaces (topology service, AutoBAHN service
>>    and pathfinder) to access the cNIS data repository.
>
> Regards,
> Freek