[rus-wg] draft-ggf-wsi-rus-9

[Hiro Kishimoto]

Hi Steven,

I recommend you to replace its document template by the latest version
before GGF editor submission.

http://www.ggf.org/documents/formats/gwd-template.doc
http://www.gridforum.org/ggf_docs_process.htm

Thanks,
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Hiro Kishimoto

Steven Newhouse wrote:
> All,
> 
> A few minor change tracked alterations.
> 
> On re-re-reading it a few thoughts came to mind that I'd like comments on:
> 
> 1. Section 3.1.1  The second half of the paragraph seems implementation 
> specifc, e.g. rus:resourceDescription is not mentioned elsewhere. Should 
> this be deleted?
> 
> 2. In section 5.1.2 we define a RecordIdList and RecordId. These are 
> correctly used within the document. Would these make more sense if the 
> RecordId was replaced by RUSId ?
> 
> Steven
> 
> PS: Independent review and comments from others on the document would be 
> appreciated!
>