[ogsa-wg] Final edits on Profile Definition
Andreas Savva
andreas.savva at jp.fujitsu.com
Mon Jun 27 16:30:45 CDT 2005
> I leave it to Andreas to post this version to GridForge and submit it
> to the editor as soon as possible.
I have reviewed the doc, removed a few remaining last comments, and made
one minor change in section 3. ("This Profile" - > "This document...")
I have uploaded it as version 15 on gridforge and also submitted it to
the GGF Editor.
Ref:
https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-ggf-ogsa-profile-definition/en/15
Andreas
David Snelling wrote:
> Folks,
>
> Here's what I did.
>
> 1) Accepted all edits including the changes I made, which are listed
> below. Feel free to object to these changes. Otherwise, the document
> is ready for the editor.
>
> 2) In section 4.4 there were two "should"s which I changed to
> "SHOULD"s as the section is generally proscriptive and therefore
> normative language is appropriate.
>
> 3) In section 5.2, I added the phrase ", when at the Proposed
> Recommendation stage of publication," two the first two paragraphs to
> make it clear when in the GGF process the rules apply. I felt the
> section header was not normative enough.
>
> That's all. Thank you everyone for making this document a complete
> project.
>
> I leave it to Andreas to post this version to GridForge and submit it
> to the editor as soon as possible.
>
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