[ogsa-wg] Final edits on Profile Definition

[David Snelling]

Folks,

Here's what I did.

1) Accepted all edits including the changes I made, which are listed 
below. Feel free to object to these changes. Otherwise, the document is 
ready for the editor.

2) In section 4.4 there were two "should"s which I changed to "SHOULD"s 
as the section is generally proscriptive and therefore normative 
language is appropriate.

3) In section 5.2, I added the phrase ", when at the Proposed 
Recommendation stage of publication," two the first two paragraphs to 
make it clear when in the GGF process the rules apply. I felt the 
section header was not normative enough.

That's all. Thank you everyone for making this document a complete 
project.

I leave it to Andreas to post this version to GridForge and submit it 
to the editor as soon as possible.

-- 

Take care:

     Dr. David Snelling < David . Snelling . UK . Fujitsu . com >
     Fujitsu Laboratories of Europe
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