[ogsa-wg] Minor comments on documents

[Hiro Kishimoto]

Thanks Steven,

My comments inline <HK>.
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Hiro Kishimoto

Steven Newhouse wrote:
> OGSA WSRF Basic Profile 1.0 (v018 June 13th 2005)
> 
> Page 1: Status of this memo
> Is there not a WSRF missing from this opening line?
> e.g. '... write normative OGSA services based around the WSRF set of 
> specifications.'

<HK>
Good catch! Your text works for me.
</HK>

> OGSA Roadmap (v010 June 6th 2005)
> 
> Section 2, Point 1, Bullet 3: Should these service description documents 
> not be 'owned' by the working group developing the service? The text 
> implies to me that the OGSA-WG writes them... which I don't think is the 
> case.

<HK>
Good point. Let's add something like "domain-expert WG writes this
service description (scenario document) if appropriate."
</HK>

> Section 2.2:
> Should there not be some statement that OGSA profiles should be 
> developed/revised outside the OGSA-WG in theor own WG?

<HK>
I think they can if their Profile abide by OGSA branding guideline.
</HK>

> Cheers,
> 
> Steven