[ogsa-wg] Minor comments on documents

[Steven Newhouse]

OGSA WSRF Basic Profile 1.0 (v018 June 13th 2005)

Page 1: Status of this memo
Is there not a WSRF missing from this opening line?
e.g. '... write normative OGSA services based around the WSRF set of 
specifications.'

OGSA Roadmap (v010 June 6th 2005)

Section 2, Point 1, Bullet 3: Should these service description documents 
not be 'owned' by the working group developing the service? The text 
implies to me that the OGSA-WG writes them... which I don't think is the 
case.

Section 2.2:
Should there not be some statement that OGSA profiles should be 
developed/revised outside the OGSA-WG in theor own WG?

Cheers,

Steven
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