[ogsa-wg] draft-ggf-ogsa-wsrf-basic-profile.doc comments

[Michael Behrens]

A few nit-noids and some other general comments:

Entire document: Should "WSRF" be added to all the places in the 
document when referring to this docment?  (lines 26, 83, 103, etc).
Page 3:
line 24: recommend changing "distributed system management" to something 
more general, such as "distributed computing" or "grid computing".

line 26: Needs rewording as it is a long sentance.  suggestion:
The OGSA WSRF Basic Profile 1.0 is a GGF Recommended Profile which 
describes uses of widely accepted specifications that have been found to 
enable interoperability and is modelled after the OGSA Profile 
Definition informational document [ogsa-profile-template].

line 115: spelling of introspecation

Page 4
line 157:  URLs  for wsrc-rl and wsn do not resolve.

Page 5
line 190: URL is not ready yet - however I think that is known and is 
expected to be there.  Should WSRF be in the name here too?

----- I started glancing at this point - I'll continue with more detail 
reading tomorrow.




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