[ogsa-wg] FINAL CALL Document OGSA WSRF BP 1.0 v036

[Tom Maguire]

Jem,

I added all of your nits.  I reread Appendix E.  You are correct that
it should be MUST NOT not MAY NOT.  Good catch.

Tom


"Treadwell, Jem" <jem.treadwell at hp.com> wrote on 07/29/2005 04:46:06 PM:

> Tom, my annotated review attached. I gather that you've already
> incorporated comments from others, so this is based on a clean copy
> of v36.  Most of these are, of course, minor nits, and some are just
> periods or colons added.  However, there are a couple that are quite
> significant, most notably the use of MAY NOT in Appendix E.
>
> Your discretion on which of these you incorporate, and I vote YES to
> go to the editor.  Great job by you and the whole team!
>
> - Jem
>
>
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: owner-ogsa-wg at ggf.org [mailto:owner-ogsa-wg at ggf.org] On
> > Behalf Of Tom Maguire
> > Sent: Wednesday, July 27, 2005 11:48 PM
> > To: ogsa-wg at ggf.org
> > Subject: [ogsa-wg] FINAL CALL Document OGSA WSRF BP 1.0 v036
> >
> > https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-gg
> > f-ogsa-wsrf-basic-profile/en/31
> >
> >
> > The final call document for the OGSA WSRF Basic Profile 1.0
> > is available for download at the above link.  Please review
> > and positive acknowledge with an email to the mailing list
> > with your vote (yea or nay) for submission from the workgroup
> > to the GGF Editor.  Please vote (email) by Friday, July 29th
> > COB (EDT).
> >
> > If your vote is 'nay' please include precise comments so that
> > we may address any substantive issues you may have prior to
> > submission.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Tom
> >
> >
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> >
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> > add, but when there is nothing left to take away.   - Antoine
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> >
> >
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