[ogsa-wg] FINAL CALL Document OGSA WSRF BP 1.0 v036

[Treadwell, Jem]

Tom, my annotated review attached. I gather that you've already incorporated comments from others, so this is based on a clean copy of v36.  Most of these are, of course, minor nits, and some are just periods or colons added.  However, there are a couple that are quite significant, most notably the use of MAY NOT in Appendix E.

Your discretion on which of these you incorporate, and I vote YES to go to the editor.  Great job by you and the whole team!

- Jem



> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-ogsa-wg at ggf.org [mailto:owner-ogsa-wg at ggf.org] On 
> Behalf Of Tom Maguire
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> Subject: [ogsa-wg] FINAL CALL Document OGSA WSRF BP 1.0 v036
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> https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-gg
> f-ogsa-wsrf-basic-profile/en/31
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> 
> The final call document for the OGSA WSRF Basic Profile 1.0 
> is available for download at the above link.  Please review 
> and positive acknowledge with an email to the mailing list 
> with your vote (yea or nay) for submission from the workgroup 
> to the GGF Editor.  Please vote (email) by Friday, July 29th 
> COB (EDT).
> 
> If your vote is 'nay' please include precise comments so that 
> we may address any substantive issues you may have prior to 
> submission.
> 
> Thanks,
> Tom
> 
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