[ogsa-wg] FINAL CALL Document OGSA WSRF BP 1.0 v036

[Srinivasan, Latha]

Tom,
Looks good. I have some minor nits/ modifications that I made on Hiro's
version, so hopefully you don't have to go through merge nightmares.
They are not show stoppers necessarily, so my vote is a yea. 

Regards,
Latha



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From: owner-ogsa-wg at ggf.org [mailto:owner-ogsa-wg at ggf.org] On Behalf Of
Djaoui, A (Abdeslem)
Sent: Friday, July 29, 2005 11:02 AM
To: Tom Maguire
Cc: ogsa-wg at ggf.org
Subject: RE: [ogsa-wg] FINAL CALL Document OGSA WSRF BP 1.0 v036

Hi
Just some fairly minor comments, othewise yea, go for it.
I'll leave it up to Tom to decide on the 3 points below.

Abdeslem
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Section 2:
line 184: should the conformance claim URI be
"http://www.ggf.org/namespaces/2005/07/OGSAWSRFBasicProfile-1.0"
and, I guess if we include WSRF here, all other namespaces (in schema)
should also be changed.

Section 4:
line 267: DO you mean wsdl:Service or wsdl:Service/port? in WSDL 1.1 a
Service can aggregate many ports.
Anyway the sentence is not clear: "a list of all portTypes that were
used to compose the wsdl:Service"? Do you mean the portTypes
corresponding to different ports, or the list of known portTypes that
were composed together to make a new portType for this Service/port?

Section 4.4.1:
line 366: RECOMMENDS should be MANDATES in order to be consistent with
section 6.1 where the profile MANDATES the use NotificationProducer for
notifications of events from resources. 

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Tom Maguire wrote:
> https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-ggf-ogsa-w
> srf-basic-profile/en/31
> 
> 
> The final call document for the OGSA WSRF Basic Profile 1.0 is 
> available for download at the above link.  Please review and positive 
> acknowledge with an email to the mailing list with your vote (yea or 
> nay) for submission from the workgroup to the GGF Editor.  Please vote

> (email) by Friday, July 29th COB (EDT).
> 
> If your vote is 'nay' please include precise comments so that we may 
> address any substantive issues you may have prior to submission.
> 
> Thanks,
> Tom
> 
> 
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