OGSA version 1.0 draft 21 (was Re: [ogsa-wg] Teleconference minutes - 22 December 2004)

[Hiro Kishimoto]

Many thanks Andreas,

I will read it though and get back to you if I find nits.

Can you reply to the public comments on the gridForge?
https://forge.gridforum.org/forum/forum.php?forum_id=423

I think the simplest way is paste the following excel sheet URL
and ask them to check it out.
https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/ogsa-v1-public-comments/en
/6

Thanks again,
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Hiro Kishimoto


> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-ogsa-wg at ggf.org [mailto:owner-ogsa-wg at ggf.org] On Behalf Of
Andreas
> Savva
> Sent: Wednesday, December 29, 2004 7:23 PM
> To: 'ogsa-wg'
> Subject: OGSA version 1.0 draft 21 (was Re: [ogsa-wg] Teleconference minutes -
22
> December 2004)
> 
> I uploaded draft 21. This draft is more or less up complete; the EMS
> section still needs some work, however. Changes are visible and are
> still relative to draft 19. Let me know if there are any problems. We
> might have some time on the next call (Jan. 5) to discuss both this
> document and the Glossary.
> 
> Draft 19 is still the 'active' version so use the following url to
> download draft 21:
> 
>
https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-ggf-ogsa-spec/en/21
> 
> >
> >  - To do (Andreas)
> >    - Figure 2: workflow should be capitalized (Workflow)
> >    - Move the copyright and intellectual property notices to the
> >      back.
> >    - Make sure that spelling is consistent: change english to US spelling
> >    - Add MUWS / MOWS references now that WSDM work has reached
> >      committee draft.
> >    - Add general acknowledgement for public comment reviewers and
> >      name Philipp Wieder since he gave very comprehensive comments.
> >    - Upload the new draft (draft 21) keeping the changes to draft 20
> >      visible.
> >
> >
> >
> >
>