[ogsa-dmi-wg] Comments on the last call draft

[Michel Drescher]

Hi all,

sorry for not copying OGSA-DMI in.

I have been in conversation with Greg on this already. I sent him an  
edited draft 58, called "58bis" incorporating Steve's comments.

Cheers,
Michel

On 22 May 2008, at 13:16, Mario Antonioletti wrote:

>
> Thanks Steven - can we pass these on to Greg Newby? Michel did the
> final edit afore your email. Can we take this forward in some manner?
>
> Mario
>
>
> On Wed, 21 May 2008, Steven Newhouse wrote:
>
>> I found some minor non-normative editorial issues:
>>
>> 1. Ravi's name is missing or hidden in the header on pages 2 & 3
>> 2. Last paragraph of 1.2 'they are able to still interoperate'
>> 3. Page 15. Definition of @dmi:DataUrl attribute - remove the space
>> 4. Section 4.3.3 - the title indent needs to be fixed
>> 5. Section 5.2.6.1 - broken link
>> 6. Section 5.4.1 - Replace Figure XXX with something & there's a  
>> broken reference in the previous paragraph
>>
>> I've not had time to look at the XML - and apologies for missing  
>> the call.
>>
>> Steven
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