[ogsa-dmi-wg] Comments on the last call draft

[Mario Antonioletti]

Thanks Steven - can we pass these on to Greg Newby? Michel did the 
final edit afore your email. Can we take this forward in some manner?

Mario


On Wed, 21 May 2008, Steven Newhouse wrote:

> I found some minor non-normative editorial issues:
>
> 1. Ravi's name is missing or hidden in the header on pages 2 & 3
> 2. Last paragraph of 1.2 'they are able to still interoperate'
> 3. Page 15. Definition of @dmi:DataUrl attribute - remove the space
> 4. Section 4.3.3 - the title indent needs to be fixed
> 5. Section 5.2.6.1 - broken link
> 6. Section 5.4.1 - Replace Figure XXX with something & there's a broken reference in the previous paragraph
>
> I've not had time to look at the XML - and apologies for missing the call.
>
> Steven
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