[occi-wg] JSON Document
Edmonds Andrew (edmo)
edmo at zhaw.ch
Wed May 16 10:48:44 EDT 2012
First, Great work!
Here are some editorial comments:
- Please ensure line breaks at col 80
- The pdf build is broken. There is a missing dependency of "! LaTeX
Error: File `json_rendering.out.pyg' not found." Please fix with a README
with directions on installing the dependency.
- In all tables, 'name resources' doesn't make sense. Possibly should be
'named resources'? If so I can make the edits or it's at your pleasure :-)
- 'Necessity' in all tables. This is some what out of step with existing
specs. Can it be aligned along 'Mutability' and 'Multiplicity' as in the
existing OCCI specification series?
- I've made and committed some minor changes. Review at your leisure.
HTH,
Andy
Andy Edmonds
Senior Researcher
Institute of Information Technology
Zurich University of Applied Sciences
http://andy.edmonds.be, @dizz
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