[Nsi-wg] edits for version 1.0

[John Vollbrecht]

Attached are edits for version 1.0.  I assume changes discussed this morning will be included in next version.  Mostly the changes are editorial.  I also include comments where I think it could be improved but am ok with it in this form for initial release.  These comments may resurface during review period :)

John


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