[Nmc-wg] [ogf nmc-base svn commit] r16 - /

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Author: macfreek
Date: 2010-03-15 04:04:44 -0500 (Mon, 15 Mar 2010)
New Revision: 16

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   introduction.tex
   motivation.tex
   nmc-base.pdf
Log:
Second some textual changes to introduction and motivation.
- Improved figure 2, it tries to convey the concept that a node can be both a client and a server. It now explicitly shows both exchanges.
- removed SHOULD/MUST requirements that refer to this document itself. (e.g. "This document MUST define ...."). I found this confusing to read: DOES the document define this, or SHOULD it do so, but does not (yet) do so?



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