[GGF-ipv6-wg] Re: Final edits: [ggf-editor | Submit GGF Draft - 982] Survey of IPv4 Dependencies in Global Gri (fwd)

[Piers O'Hanlon]

Rute,

> 
> Document edited and uploaded. Please check if everything is Okey, concerning
> the submission process.
> 
> https://forge.gridforum.org/tracker/?func=detail&atid=414&aid=982&group_id=9
> 0%20(https://forge.gridforum.org/tracker/?func=detail&atid=414&aid=982&group
> _id=90) 
> 
That's great - Greg Newby has now taken it onwards into the GGF process and it's now very close to being officially published. It actually states it's current 'Resolution' and being 'Published' in the tracker.

Thanks,

Piers.

> Regards,
> Rute
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Piers O'Hanlon [mailto:P.OHanlon at cs.ucl.ac.uk] 
> Sent: 25 November 2004 17:06
> To: Sofia Rute
> Cc: 'Piers O'Hanlon'; ipv6-wg
> Subject: Re: Final edits: [ggf-editor | Submit GGF Draft - 982] Survey of
> IPv4 Dependencies in Global Gri (fwd)
> 
> 
> Hi,
> > 
> > I will try to update the document by tomorrow, given that I hope this 
> > is the final cut.
> > 
> Great - yes I hope so too!
> 
> 
> > Comments inline, please respond as soon as possible:
> > 
> > 
> > - - 2.2.1: could you put an example of correct usage for 
> > http://example.com or similar?  Ditto for 2.4.2.
> > 
> > 
> > [RS] In  both sections, the example provided is a quotation from the 
> > specification. So I do not think it is appropriate this.
> > 
> I agree it seems a bit unnecessary but to wrap it up you could just simply
> add an example (using the documentation prefix 2001:0DB8::/32) RFC2732
> compliant IPv6 literal URI for each section.
> 
> > 
> > - - Section 6: See my comment about security considerations for 
> > tracker 981. Might the same apply here?  Is there a risk from improper 
> > specification of use of IP versions?
> > 
> > [RS] Need info on this tracker. How can I get it?
> >
> Yes these tracker numbers are a bit cryptic - It's the guidelines doc -
> here's the tracker they're referring to:
> https://forge.gridforum.org/tracker/?func=detail&atid=414&aid=981&group_id=9
> 0
> 
> > Shall I send you the final document , and you upload it?
> > 
> It should be fine for you to upload - using your Gridforge account - if
> there's any problems just send it to me and I can upload it.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Piers.
> 
> > Rute
> > 
> 


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