[GRIDRPC-WG] Group rechartering

[Yusuke Tanimura]

Dear Yves and all,

Thanks for your pointing out.  I revised the document accordingly.

> "* Definition of a specific data structure to be used for GridRPC arguments in 
> middleware."
> -> maybe use "for arguments in GridRPC middleware"?

Fixed.


> "* Definition of a "grpc_arg" data type to be used in conjunction with the 
> argument data structure."
> -> If we use a name for the data type, maybe we can use the one that we use in 
> the document "grpc_data_t" or we do not call it. In consequence, we have to 
> adapt later in "* Definition of mechanisms.."

I changed the first sentence to

  * Definition of the data type to be used in conjunction with the argument
    data structure.

and the second sentence to

  * Definition of mechanisms for handling persistent data, e.g., definition
    and use of a concept such as "data handles" (which might be the same as
    or similar to a grpc_data_t data type). 


> Cosmetics: 
> "e.g." -> e.g.,  ; "Grid-RPC"->GridRPC

Fixed.


> "Of the four GridRPC-like tools available today, NetSolve is widely deployed 
> and used."
> -> This sentence does not have any sens, since there is no comparison. Maybe 
> we can remove it, or at least, reformulate it. As it begins the presentation 
> of the NetSolve Grid middleware, I suggest either to remove it or replace it 
> by "NetSolve is widely deployed and used".

I replaced it by "NetSolve is widely deployed and used".


> Typo
> "number of download is"-> number of downloads is

Fixed.


> Dear Yusuke,
> 
> Here are the small comments that we have on the document. Except those ones, 
> the document is perfect. Thank you for your work.
> 
> "* Definition of a specific data structure to be used for GridRPC arguments in 
> middleware."
> -> maybe use "for arguments in GridRPC middleware"?
> 
> "* Definition of a "grpc_arg" data type to be used in conjunction with the 
> argument data structure."
> -> If we use a name for the data type, maybe we can use the one that we use in 
> the document "grpc_data_t" or we do not call it. In consequence, we have to 
> adapt later in "* Definition of mechanisms.."
> 
> Cosmetics: 
> "e.g." -> e.g.,  ; "Grid-RPC"->GridRPC
> 
> "Of the four GridRPC-like tools available today, NetSolve is widely deployed 
> and used."
> -> This sentence does not have any sens, since there is no comparison. Maybe 
> we can remove it, or at least, reformulate it. As it begins the presentation 
> of the NetSolve Grid middleware, I suggest either to remove it or replace it 
> by "NetSolve is widely deployed and used".
> 
> Typo
> "number of download is"-> number of downloads is
> 
> Best Regards.
> 
> .Yves.
> 
> Le Tuesday 10 June 2008 02:42:37 Yusuke Tanimura, vous avez $BqD(Brit?:
> > Dear all,
> >
> > We discussed about the recharter at the session in OGF 23.
> > Thanks for all participants!  Attachment is a revised version
> > according to our discussion.
> >
> > * Download statistics of NetSolve/GridSolve is updated.
> > * Document type of "Data Management API within the GridRPC"
> >   is changed from Recommendation to Informational.
> > * A new planned recommendation document, "A GridRPC Model
> >   and API v2," is added to our deliverables.
> >
> > It is really time to finalize and send the document to the
> > area director.  Please give us any further comments within
> > a week if you have.
> >
> > Best regards,
> >
> > -----------------------------------------------------
> > Yusuke Tanimura <yusuke.tanimura at aist.go.jp>
> > Information Technology Research Institute, AIST
> > 1-1-1 Umezono, Tsukuba Central 2
> > Tsukuba City 305-8568, Japan
> > TEL: +81-29-862-6703  / FAX: +81-29-862-6601
> 
> 
> 
> -- 
> Yves Caniou
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Yusuke Tanimura <yusuke.tanimura at aist.go.jp>
Information Technology Research Institute, AIST
1-1-1 Umezono, Tsukuba Central 2
Tsukuba City 305-8568, Japan
TEL: +81-29-862-6703  / FAX: +81-29-862-6601
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