[GRIDRPC-WG] Group rechartering

[Yves Caniou]

Dear Yusuke,

Here are the small comments that we have on the document. Except those ones, 
the document is perfect. Thank you for your work.

"* Definition of a specific data structure to be used for GridRPC arguments in 
middleware."
-> maybe use "for arguments in GridRPC middleware"?

"* Definition of a "grpc_arg" data type to be used in conjunction with the 
argument data structure."
-> If we use a name for the data type, maybe we can use the one that we use in 
the document "grpc_data_t" or we do not call it. In consequence, we have to 
adapt later in "* Definition of mechanisms.."

Cosmetics: 
"e.g." -> e.g.,  ; "Grid-RPC"->GridRPC

"Of the four GridRPC-like tools available today, NetSolve is widely deployed 
and used."
-> This sentence does not have any sens, since there is no comparison. Maybe 
we can remove it, or at least, reformulate it. As it begins the presentation 
of the NetSolve Grid middleware, I suggest either to remove it or replace it 
by "NetSolve is widely deployed and used".

Typo
"number of download is"-> number of downloads is

Best Regards.

.Yves.

Le Tuesday 10 June 2008 02:42:37 Yusuke Tanimura, vous avez écrit :
> Dear all,
>
> We discussed about the recharter at the session in OGF 23.
> Thanks for all participants!  Attachment is a revised version
> according to our discussion.
>
> * Download statistics of NetSolve/GridSolve is updated.
> * Document type of "Data Management API within the GridRPC"
>   is changed from Recommendation to Informational.
> * A new planned recommendation document, "A GridRPC Model
>   and API v2," is added to our deliverables.
>
> It is really time to finalize and send the document to the
> area director.  Please give us any further comments within
> a week if you have.
>
> Best regards,
>
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