[glue-wg] Second half of glue review

[Baptiste Grenier]

Hi Jens, all

Thanks for the feedback.

So we put an online version in place, hoping that Office online will not 
tamper too much with the formatting:
https://theegifoundation-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/g/personal/baptiste_grenier_egi_eu/ET0LAxNmJPBAiDS98IxN0vwBhNbaEcaB6vzWb5_-nQioQQ?e=sLtYBA

It doesn't require authenticated access (wasn't sure everyone was 
willing to have/use a MS account to access), but would be cleaner to 
have people use an account so that we can track changes more easily.

Let us know if you think we should use another solution/restrict access.

We will try to address or comments the points by the meeting, but some 
comments are a bit too generic, it would help to have more clear 
pointers to the problems.

Also some comments are related to "legacy" content that haven't been 
touched by the Cloud and Accelerator additions, so not sure who should 
address them.

For reference the public comments are at 
https://redmine.ogf.org/boards/43/topics/506?r=522

Best,
Baptiste


Le 07/11/19 à 12:12, Jensen, Jens (STFC,RAL,SC) téléscripta :
>Hello GLUE group.
>
>I have added the second half of the GLUE 2.1 review to
>
>https://redmine.ogf.org/boards/43/topics/506?r=522
>
>Note that I didn't really review it as an implementer; that would take 
>much more time (although it would be an interesting exercise). So it's 
>mostly grammar, consistency, readability, typos, etc.
>
>Not sure if I can remember to join the call on the 12th (I'll be 
>remote) but I don't think you need me?
>
>Regards
>--jens


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