[glue-wg] Second half of glue review

[Jensen, Jens (STFC,RAL,SC)]

Hello GLUE group.

I have added the second half of the GLUE 2.1 review to

https://redmine.ogf.org/boards/43/topics/506?r=522

Note that I didn't really review it as an implementer; that would take 
much more time (although it would be an interesting exercise). So it's 
mostly grammar, consistency, readability, typos, etc.

Not sure if I can remember to join the call on the 12th (I'll be remote) 
but I don't think you need me?

Regards
--jens