[glue-wg] VOTE by 7/31: GLUE 2.0 LDAP Rendering release for public comment

Tue Sep 2 07:34:46 EDT 2014

ACCEPT

Thanks for this work JP. However, it would be nice if you can fix these:

- Page 10, section 3.7, the sentence

  "For example, a <strike>GLUE2</strike>ComputingEndpoint entry..."

I noticed that GLUE2 has been removed. However an "entry" is an LDAP
entry for me, and that's why I kept the GLUE2 prefix. Since is written
in Italic, that should be a model /Entity/. There is no major problem
leaving it like that. The document does not define any typesetting for
LDAP entries.
A more complete sentence would be:
" For example, a <italic>ComputingEndpoint</italic> entity would be
realised as an LDAP GLUE2ComputingEndpoint entry  that consists of..."

Page 16, reference [gLite] should be http://gridinfo.web.cern.ch/

- Page 17, bullet 2),

typo: there is an R at the beginning of a paragraph that should be removed.

I also would like to ask the group if it is ok to merge the
changes in git-hub to the master branch. The current situation is that
the LDAP schema we included in the document is part of a development branch:

  https://github.com/OGF-GLUE/LDAP/tree/EMIrevision

should be merged into the master (offcial) branch

  https://github.com/OGF-GLUE/LDAP/tree/master

If the documents gets green light then I will do the merge.

Cheers,
Florido

On 2014-08-29 00:12, Navarro, John-Paul F. wrote:
> Florido and GLUE WG,
> 
> I've applied the changes you recommended and accepted all changes Stephen has made.
> 
> http://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13326?download=
> 
> Please review and reply indicating if your ACCEPT the newer version or have other suggestions.
> 
> Everyone else, please reply with your ACCEPT or REJECT so that we can move on and submit it for public comment.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> JP
> 
> On Jul 29, 2014, at 8:15 AM, Florido Paganelli <florido.paganelli at hep.lu.se> wrote:
> 
>> REJECT.
>>
>> Reason: I think some of the comments from Stephen require a fix before
>> submitting the doc.
>>
>> Thanks Stephen for the nice corrections in the text.
>>
>>
>> Major comments (MUST fix before approval):
>>
>> - LDAP Schema should be in an Appendix B, and not copy pasted after
>> Appendix A. Otherwise is very misleading; the reader might thing that
>> the schema is community specific, but is not. We put a lot of energy in
>> keeping it generic enough.
>>
>> - Appendix A might require references to documents/websites as pointed
>>  out by Stephen. I think this makes it a serious document.
>>  Please Stephen or Maria, David provide references for gLite and GOCDB
>>  where comments from Stephen point it out.
>>
>>  I can provide references to such documents for ARC:
>>  Page 16, Appendix A, paragraph 1:
>>    ARC (http://www.nordugrid.org/arc)
>>
>>
>>
>> minor comments (not preventing approval):
>>
>> - Page 10, section 3.7, the sentence
>>
>>  "For example, a <strike>GLUE2</strike>ComputingEndpoint entry..."
>>
>> I noticed that GLUE2 has been removed. However an "entry" is an LDAP
>> entry for me, and that's why I kept the GLUE2 prefix. Since is written
>> in Italic, that should be a model /Entity/. There is no major problem
>> leaving it like that. The document does not define any typesetting for
>> LDAP entries.
>> A more complete sentence would be:
>> " For example, a <italic>ComputingEndpoint</italic> entity would be
>> realised as an LDAP GLUE2ComputingEndpoint entry  that consists of..."
>>
>> - Page 17, bullet 2),
>>
>> typo: there is an R at the beginning of a paragraph that should be removed.
>>
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Florido
>>
>> On 2014-07-23 17:00, JP Navarro wrote:
>>> GLUE Working Group:
>>>
>>> As agreed to at OGF 41.
>>>
>>> By July 31, please review the following document and reply with a vote to APPROVE or REJECT to release for public comment.
>>>  http://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13302?download=
>>>
>>> If you vote to REJECT, please summarize your concerns.
>>>
>>> If you have minor editorial corrections or improvements, please reply and attach your change tracked edits and appending your initial to the file-name. 
>>>
>>> Regards,
>>>
>>> JP and Shahbaz
>>>
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>>
>>
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 Florido Paganelli
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   System Administrator
 Lund University
 Department of Physics
 Division of Particle Physics
 BOX118
 221 00 Lund
 Office Location: Fysikum, Hus B, Rum B313
 Office Tel: 046-2220272
 Email: florido.paganelli at REMOVE_THIShep.lu.se
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