[glue-wg] GLUE 2.0 Specification - draft 41 - Working Group Last Call

[Balazs Konya]

hi,

Please find below some corrections spotted by our nordugrid colleagues.

Balazs

> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: Re: [NG-disc] GLUE 2.0 Specification - draft 41 - Working Group    Last Call
> Date: Wed, 14 May 2008 16:06:55 +0200
> From: Mattias Ellert <mattias.ellert at fysast.uu.se>
> Reply-To: Technical discussion about the middleware <nordugrid-discuss at nordugrid.org>
> To: Technical discussion about the middleware <nordugrid-discuss at nordugrid.org>
> References: <48299CD2.5070807 at hep.lu.se>
> 
> Hi (especially Balázs),
> 
> here are a few comments on the last call draft.
> 
> Page 4:  ‘MUST” → “MUST”
> 
> Page 4: fmultiple → multiple (or maybe multiples)
> 
> Page 11: see Section 0 → see Section 6.2
> 
> Page 13: In the table for the Policy entity, UserDomain.ID is marked
> <<abstract>> though it is not.
> 
> Page 15: Application Environment Handle → Application Handle
> 
> Page 16: single computing manager which execution environments → single
> computing manager whose execution environments
> 
> Page 20: see Section 0 → see Section 5.6
> 
> Page 21: The description for LogicalCPUDistribution doesn't make sense
> 
> General: OtherInfo attribute vs. Extension entity association. Do you
> need both? When to use which? You probably though of this already.
> 
> General: Some of the tables lack the vertical dividers/edges.
> 
>     Mattias