[tsc] Updated version of TSC doc

[Joel Replogle]

All - I've updated the TSC doc addressing the responses to public  
comments as follows:

version 1.1.1, address the 7 public comments labeled "forwared email  
comment #x", except for:
a) Rewording last sentence (or perhaps whole paragraph) of section  
1.3 for clarity (from comment #1)
b) clarifying action/response bullets 2 & 6 in section 3 (from  
comment #1)
c) adding something to section 2 to clarify we're not trying to boil  
the ocean (from comment #5)

Steven Newhouse, the pen passes to you to continue.  Latest version  
is attached and on Gridforge at:
https://forge.gridforum.org/sf/go/doc13748

To review our actions, here is what Dave sent out:

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1) Joel: On Monday to edit Footnotes and typos

2) Steven: On Tuesday morning to address as much as possible.

3) Dave: On Tuesday PM following the GFSG call to take over.

4) Robert: On Wednesday will make a Final pass at whatever is left.

5) Dave will send to Greg for processing.

All the recommended responses to PCs are in the mails sent by Dave  
and Chris over the last week. These are the issues we will address in  
the document.
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Thanks,

Joel


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