[scrm-pvt] Revised Press Release

[Wijnen, Bert (Bert)]

Thanks Hiro. Looks good.

Again I would change "expert" into "experts" in sentence:
   and will encourage their technical expert to 

Again, I do not see much use in a press release, but this way
I can live with it. I can only tell Thursday (possibly
even Friday) if there will be an IETF quote. But I doubt
there will be one. Will let you know.

Bert

> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-scrm-private at ggf.org [mailto:owner-scrm-private at ggf.org]On
> Behalf Of Hiro Kishimoto
> Sent: Wednesday, June 08, 2005 09:51
> To: scrm-private at ggf.org
> Subject: RE: [scrm-pvt] Revised Press Release
> 
> 
> Thanks Bert and Dave,
> 
> Since your comments make sense to me, I've added them to the draft
> press release. Please have a look.
> ----
> Hiro Kishimoto
> 
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Dave Sidor [mailto:djsidor at nortel.com]
> > Sent: Wednesday, June 08, 2005 12:58 PM
> > To: Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
> > Cc: Hiro Kishimoto; scrm-private at ggf.org
> > Subject: Re: [scrm-pvt] Revised Press Release [was: Revised 
> press release
> > draft and charter document draft]
> > 
> > Bert et al,
> > 
> > I can live with Bert's proposed change. Editorial: there is an "and"
> > missing.
> > 
> > The ITU-T will not be providing a quotation so you can remove the
> > placeholder for the ITU-T quotation.
> > 
> > Dave
> > 
> > "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" wrote:
> > >
> > > The draft press release now says:
> > >
> > >    Other standards development organizations such as the
> > >    Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF), the International
> > >    Telecommunication Union - Telecommunication Standardization
> > >    Sector (ITU-T), have expressed interest in participating
> > >    in this activity.
> > >
> > > Could that be changed into
> > >
> > >    .............., have expressed an interest and will encourage
> > >    their technical experts to participate in this activity.
> > >
> > > I do not yet have a quote from IETF.
> > > Not sure we want to do a quote, and even if we do, then it will
> > > depend on your acceptance of the above suggested change I think.
> > >
> > > Bert
> > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: owner-scrm-private at ggf.org 
[mailto:owner-scrm-private at ggf.org]On
> > > Behalf Of Hiro Kishimoto
> > > Sent: Monday, June 06, 2005 18:21
> > > To: scrm-private at ggf.org
> > > Subject: [scrm-pvt] Revised press release draft and charter document
> > > draft
> > >
> > >
> > > Hi all,
> > >
> > > Thank you very much for joining today's call.
> > >
> > > The attached is a revised press release draft and charter document
> > > draft, Jay and I write-up based on the discussions we had today.
> > >
> > > We've agreed to do the following two things by this Thursday
> > > (June 9).
> > >
> > > (1) Review these documents and send back suggested changes.
> > > (2) Provide your supporting quote if possible.
> > >
> > > Thanks again,
> > > ----
> > > Hiro Kishimoto
> > >
> > >
> > >