[ogsa-wg] modeling guidelines doc v14

[Ellen Stokes]

Fred,

After reviewing version 14, I have two minor updates that I hope you'll 
want to incorporate for usability and completeness.

(1) at the end of section 1.0, please point the reader to the dmtf 
published documents page for the latest dmtf process documents (this is 
important because the process docs are being updated this year to state 
much more about interactions between dmtf and alliance 
partners...contacting the liaison may not be enough and/or may result in a 
delay to getting questions answered

(2) in section 4.3 (end of first paragraph), please change dmtf portal to 
dmtf feedback portal and include the URL 
http://www.dmtf.org/standards/feedback

Otherwise, I'm happy with the doc.

Ellen





"Fred Maciel" <Fred.Maciel at hds.com> 
04/28/2008 07:58 PM

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Hi,

     I uploaded v14 to GridForge. The spreadsheet shows the comments
that I'm not sure about, and the remaining ones are from Ellen and
David, so please review them.

Thanks,

Fred Maciel
Hitachi America R&D
www.hitachi.com/truestories