[ogsa-wg] Update OGSA roadmap v1.1 draft

[Toshiyuki Nakata]

Hi Hiro:

CC:OGSA-WG Members + GRAAP Co-chair/Secretaries.

Thank you very much for including WS-Agreement Spec in the Roadmap.

Some comments related to WS-Agreement Spec part..


>4.8	WS-Agreement Specification Version 1.0
>This specification defines the Web Services Agreement Specification
(WS-Agreement), 
>a Web services protocol for establishing agreement between two parties, 
>such as between a service provider and a consumer.  WS-Agreement uses an
extensible 
>XML language for specifying the nature of the agreement, and agreement
templates 
>to facilitate discovery of compatible agreement terms.

>4.8.1	Development Schedule
>Version 1.0 will be released May 2007 as GFD-R.P.-107. 

I would suggest to change to 

Version 1.0 has been  released May 2007 as GFD-R.P.-107. 

>Changes to this document will be made by OGSA-Naming-WG. 

I think this is a cut & paste error from Section 4.6.1. and would suggest
deleting it.

Best Regards
Toshi

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> -----Original Message-----
> From: ogsa-wg-bounces at ogf.org 
> [mailto:ogsa-wg-bounces at ogf.org] On Behalf Of Hiro Kishimoto
> Sent: Tuesday, August 14, 2007 3:03 PM
> To: Christopher Jordan
> Cc: ogsa-wg
> Subject: [ogsa-wg] Update OGSA roadmap v1.1 draft
> 
> Hi Chris,
> 
> Thank you very much for very successful OGSA roadmap review session
> today. We are really close to its completion.
> 
> I've uploaded updated roadmap draft onto GridForege as rev 021.
> Please take it from here and add the finishing touch on it.
> 
> https://forge.gridforum.org/sf/go/doc13733
> 
> We will have really final review call on Aug. 27 (Monday).
> 
> Thanks again,
> -- 
> Hiro Kishimoto
> 
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