[ogsa-wg] New version of the guidelines document -- please review for F2F

[Hiro Kishimoto]

Hi Fred,

My comments below:

(1) Document category name

We need to define name of this document category. In current draft,
it is called;
- Information model profile
- Information model specification
- Information model profiles + model extensions
- Specification related to information model
- Specification on profiles and extensions
- OGSA information model profile
- OGSA information model specification

I prefer "OGSA information model profile" (OGSA IMP).

(2) Description on how to do the rendering/data model
I cannot find such description except first paragraph on page 5.

(3) Section 4.1
DMTF CIM schema specific Status Type and Adoption Level is
necessary.

Using the same structure as chapter 5 of GFD.59 (OGSA profile
definition) makes this section more easy-to-read.

4.1.x Recommended OGSA IMP as Proposed Recommendation
Every CIM class in a Recommended IMP, when at the Proposed
Recommendation stage of publication, MUST have one of the following
DMTF CIM class status Final or Experimental.

Every CIM class in a OGSA IMP Profile, when at the Proposed
Recommendation stage of publication, MUST be Interoperable.

CIM classes referenced by a Recommended OGSA IMP MUST be use the
same version of CIM schema.

(4) Please add DMTF CR process as new section in chapter 4

(5) merge section 4.2 into section 3.2

(6) What is the purpose of chapter 5? merge it into section 1.1?

Thanks,
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Hiro Kishimoto

Fred Maciel wrote:
> Hi,
> 
>      I just finished a new version of the guidelines document to be
> reviewed in the face-to-face. Apologies for the delay.
>      Most changes from the last version are shown in the document, but
> I'm not showing changes such as re-ordering of sections. I addressed all
> the feedback from the last revision in the March 8 teleconference. This
> version also includes lots of changes and comments from Jem (Jem: many
> thanks. BTW I erased the comments which I reflected in the text). I also
> changed the format to reflect the contents of the new GGF template.
> 
> As usual, the latest version is at the URL below. 
> 
> https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/Modeling_Guideline
> s/en
> 
> I've also uploaded that version to the F2F folder:
> 
> Regards,
> 
> Fred Maciel
> Hitachi America R&D
> 
> 
>