[ogsa-wg] Profile definition draft 12 uploaded

[Hiro Kishimoto]

Thanks Jem,

And this is a list of "nits picking."

(b1) page 1 line 24
'what is meant by a Profile' should read 'what is meant by an OGSA
Profile (hereafter "Profile")'

Then,

(b2) page 3 line 84, 87, 90, 110*2
(b3) page 4 line 113, 117, 118
(b4) page 5 line 180*2, 183, 214
(b5) page 6 line 239, 243, 250, 252
(b6) page 7 line 255, 259, 265, 270
(b7) page 8 line 306
"profile" should read "Profile"

(b8) page 3 line 66
Add "[RFC2119]" at the end of sentence.

(b9) page 3 line 104
"specification of profile" should read "specification or profile"

(b10) page 3 line 110
"Specifications" should read "Specifications or profiles"

(b11) page 4 line 134, 145
Add "[GFD.1]" at the end of the sentence.

(b12) page 9 line 285
Add new reference [OASIS TCP] OASIS Technical Committee Process
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/process.php

Then

(b13) page 4 line 134, 145
Add "[OASIS TCP]" at the end of the sentence.

(b14) page 5 line 211
Sub session title should read "Status and Adoption Level Classification
of Referenced Specification or profile"
If it is too long; "Status and Adoption Level Classification"

(b15) page 5 line 214
"referenced specifications" should be "referenced specifications or
profiles"

(b16) page 6 table 1
top left cell should read "Referenced Specifications / Profiles"

(b17) page 6 line 225
Add Legend text of "OGSA roadmap document" Appendix A

(b18) page 6 line 229
(b19) page 6 line 238*2
(b20) page 7 line 295
"specification" should read "specification or profile"

(b21) page 6 line 234
Add the following three lines.
- if the entire profile is supported exactly as provided in the 
referenced profile.
- if only part of the whole profile is required.
- if optional parts of the profile are required.

(b22) page 7 line 280
Add the following text
"Specifications referenced directly or indirectly by a Informational
Profile must be consistent. In other words, if two or more
specifications reference the same third specification then they must
reference the same version of that specification."

Thanks,
----
Hiro Kishimoto

Treadwell, Jem wrote:
> Hi, I fixed the table and made some other minor edits, and I've now
> uploaded Profile Definition v12.  It's available at
> http://tinyurl.com/93mpp.  
> 
> - Jem
> 
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-ogsa-wg at ggf.org [mailto:owner-ogsa-wg at ggf.org] On Behalf Of
> Andreas Savva
> Sent: Monday, June 20, 2005 8:51 AM
> To: 'ogsa-wg'
> Subject: [ogsa-wg] Profile definition draft 11 uploaded
> 
> I've uploaded draft 11 of the OGSA Profile Definition.
> https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/ogsa-wg/document/draft-ggf-ogsa-pro
> file-definition/en/11
> 
> The changes were described in a previous email by Hiro last week, and
> also discussed during the Wed. call.
> (http://www-unix.gridforum.org/mail_archive/ogsa-wg/2005/06/msg00063.htm
> l)
> 
> Draft 11 is basically the same as draft 10-a that was attached to Hiro's
> email. I made some additional minor revisions and cleanup: accepting old
> changes and deleting obsolete comments.
> 
> --
> Andreas Savva
> 
> 
>