[ogsa-dmi-wg] Comments on the last call draft
Steven Newhouse
Steven.Newhouse at microsoft.com
Wed May 21 13:00:59 CDT 2008
I found some minor non-normative editorial issues:
1. Ravi's name is missing or hidden in the header on pages 2 & 3
2. Last paragraph of 1.2 'they are able to still interoperate'
3. Page 15. Definition of @dmi:DataUrl attribute - remove the space
4. Section 4.3.3 - the title indent needs to be fixed
5. Section 5.2.6.1 - broken link
6. Section 5.4.1 - Replace Figure XXX with something & there's a broken reference in the previous paragraph
I've not had time to look at the XML - and apologies for missing the call.
Steven
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