[ogsa-dmi-wg] New draft (10) of the Plain WS Renderingspecification

[Mario Antonioletti]

Hi,

> I am also happy to conduct the document review on the mailing list -
> but it is crucial that I get comments in soon!

Had a read through the document on the train. Fixed some typos and 
reworded a small number of items. I think you should reference the
document once [ANTONIOLETTI] but not keep on using the reference
to speak bout the document - either call it the OGSA-DMI funcitonal
specification or the functional specification or find some suitable
abbreviation... anyhow, other than the typos it seemed ok to me.

Mario

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