[occi-wg] Fwd: NIST CCSRWG 9th Working Draft for your review and comments

[Thijs Metsch]

Somehow I miss a some texts highlighting that OCCI in a boundary protocol and can therefore be used for *aaS offerings...Also it should be addressed that we play well with others like Cloud Audit, CDMI and OVF...

I can currently only second Andy's comments - those are the same as mine. Most important is the Bibliography sections.

The updates for 6.4.2, 6.4.3, 6.4.4, 6.4.8 should be very simple by just adding OCCI in there...

Cheers,

-Thijs

-----Original Message-----
From: Edmonds, AndrewX [mailto:andrewx.edmonds at intel.com]
Sent: Thu 31.03.2011 13:29
To: Alan Sill
Cc: Thijs Metsch
Subject: RE: [occi-wg] Fwd: NIST CCSRWG 9th Working Draft for your review and	comments
 
Alan,

Here are some of my comments relating to this document. I know Thijs is also
reviewing the document so rather send off my comments perhaps we can
coordinate our replies here.

 

Comments:

In 6.4.2 "Use Case: Moving VMs and virtual appliances between Clouds"

This is missing the requirement of VM Control. If you can package up your
VMs you will still need a common means to provision the resource on the new
target cloud provider so those existing packaged VMs can be deployed.

 

In 6.4.3 "Selecting the best IaaS vendor for private externally hosted
Cloud"

The means to discover available resource types is available in OCCI. There
is however no means to discover the performance characteristics of those
resources.

Likewise for 6.4.8 "Discovering Cloud resources"

 

In 6.4.4 "Portable tools for monitoring and managing Clouds"

OCCI's availability should be marked as either "Reference Implementation"
(by many parties) or "Testing"

 

There is also a Bibliography section in the document and references to the
OCCI v1.1 document series should be added if possible.

 

HTH,

 

Andy

 

From: occi-wg-bounces at ogf.org [mailto:occi-wg-bounces at ogf.org] On Behalf Of
Alan Sill
Sent: Wednesday, March 30, 2011 8:19 PM
To: occi-wg at ogf.org
Subject: [occi-wg] Fwd: NIST CCSRWG 9th Working Draft for your review and
comments

 

FYI - update to my previous mail - please see new versions and comment form
below.

 

PLEASE READ and if possible, respond!

 

Thanks,

Alan

 

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From: "Sokol, Annie W." <annie.sokol at nist.gov>

Date: March 28, 2011 5:18:31 PM CDT

To: Multiple recipients of list <cc_standards at nist.gov>

Subject: NIST CCSRWG 9th Working Draft for your review and comments

Reply-To: "cc_standards at nist.gov" <cc_standards at nist.gov>

 

 

 

March 28, 2011

Dear All:

As per the timeline below, we are releasing the Ninth Working Draft of the
NIST Cloud Computing Standards Roadmap for your review and comments.  Please
use the attached comment template to submit your comments on or before
Monday, April 11, 2011.  Both attachments are also available on the Twiki
page
http://collaborate.nist.gov/twiki-cloud-computing/bin/view/CloudComputing/St
andardsRoadmap.

We look forward to seeing you at the NIST Cloud Computing Forum and Workshop
III, NIST, Gaithersburg, Maryland, April 7 & 8, 2011.

VR,

Annie Sokol


Date

Description

Due


Monday, March 28, 2011

9th Draft posted for NIST CCSRWG 14-day review

April 11, 2011


Thursday, April 7, 2011

NO NIST CCSRWG meeting

 


April 7 & 8 , 2011

NIST Cloud Computing Forum & Workshop III

 


Friday, April 8, 2011

NIST briefing on work of the NIST CCSRWG based upon 9th draft

 


Monday, April 11, 2011

Comments due on 9th draft

 


Wednesday, April 13, 2011

NIST proposed disposition of comments 9th posted

 


Thursday, April 14, 2011

NIST CCSRWG meeting reviews comment disposition on 9th draft

 

 


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