[occi-wg] New OCCI Infra doc build - please review: (was push by tmetsch - fixed issue 41 on 2010-06-0110:26 GMT)
Gary Mazz
garymazzaferro at gmail.com
Mon Jun 28 03:33:53 CDT 2010
Sorry for the delay in responding.
1.1
It seems that all the "kinds" are defined as resources. Why are we
calling them kinds if they are all resources I think it would be
clearer, more intuitive and more accurate to call change "kind" to
'resources'.
!.2 examples. This example is only indicative to using HTTP headers. The
RDFa needs to be included, and the current example should be qualified
to indicate this is a HTTP header version as an example and is not
representative of rdfa.
1.2 examples. The example shows the content is "ovf" not xhtml5
1.3.3 Storage
General comment. This detail provided in this section is inadequate and
makes it impossible to create a working virtual machine or cloud
computer platform. At a minimum, storage needs 4 additional attributes;
1) a source uri for the storage with an access scheme (nfs, http,
samba,ect, 2) A destination for the storage ie. dev/dev/sd1
gary
Edmonds, AndrewX wrote:
> Some suggestions & question:
>
> - 1.1 Introduction: after 1st sentence you could add, for context, "Kinds are analogous to resources in REST terminology"
> - Entries with a title of "Actions": We should note that "Actions are expressed using the Link syntax"
> - 1.3.2.1 A question on "occi.network.gateway" - is it valid to specify a gateway in CIDR notation? Anyone?
>
> Andy
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: occi-wg-bounces at ogf.org [mailto:occi-wg-bounces at ogf.org] On Behalf Of Thijs Metsch
> Sent: Tuesday, June 01, 2010 11:31 AM
> To: occi-wg at ogf.org
> Subject: [occi-wg] New OCCI Infra doc build - please review: (was push by tmetsch - fixed issue 41 on 2010-06-0110:26 GMT)
>
> Hi @all,
>
> Please review the enclosed PDF file which reflects the latest changes to the OCCI Infrastructure document. Remember that we want to publish this document (and the core and HTTP rendering documents) ASAP (before OGF 29).
>
> Especially review the contributors list: I know some are missing - please send me a direct mail (no reply all) when you feel someone is missing.
>
> Cheers,
>
> -Thijs
>
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: occi-wg-bounces at ogf.org [mailto:occi-wg-bounces at ogf.org] On
>> Behalf Of occi at googlecode.com
>> Sent: Dienstag, 1. Juni 2010 12:27
>> To: occi-wg at ogf.org
>> Subject: [occi-wg] [occi] push by tmetsch - fixed issue 41 on 2010-06-
>> 0110:26 GMT
>>
>> Revision: e3d1f0d2c2
>> Author: tmetsch
>> Date: Tue Jun 1 03:24:17 2010
>> Log: fixed issue 41
>> http://code.google.com/p/occi/source/detail?r=e3d1f0d2c2
>>
>> Modified:
>> /docs/occi-infrastructure.xml
>> /docs/occi-infrastructure_book.xml
>> /docs/ogf_template.xsl
>>
>> =======================================
>> --- /docs/occi-infrastructure.xml Tue Jan 12 01:29:18 2010
>> +++ /docs/occi-infrastructure.xml Tue Jun 1 03:24:17 2010
>> @@ -179,7 +179,7 @@
>>
>> <entry>Float (10^9 bytes)</entry>
>>
>> - <entry>RAM in megabytes (e.g. 16, 0.512)</entry>
>> + <entry>RAM in gigabytes (e.g. 1, 0.512)</entry>
>> </row>
>>
>> <row>
>> @@ -416,7 +416,14 @@
>> <title>Storage</title>
>>
>> <para>A storage resource is capable of mass storage of data
>> (e.g. a
>> - virtual hard drive).</para>
>> + virtual hard drive). </para>
>> +
>> + <note>
>> + <para>The actions defined here should trigger operations on
>> e.g.
>> + virtual images. The implementation of these operations is
>>
> left
>
>> to
>> + Cloud Storage APIs and the corresponding Storage backend
>> + solutions.</para>
>> + </note>
>>
>> <section>
>> <title>Attributes</title>
>> =======================================
>> --- /docs/occi-infrastructure_book.xml Tue Jan 12 04:29:36 2010
>> +++ /docs/occi-infrastructure_book.xml Tue Jun 1 03:24:17 2010
>> @@ -46,11 +46,14 @@
>> </listitem>
>>
>> <listitem>
>> - <para>OCCI XHTML5 rendering</para>
>> + <para>OCCI HTTP Header rendering</para>
>> </listitem>
>>
>> <listitem>
>> - <para>OCCI HTTP Header rendering</para>
>> + <para>(OCCI XHTML5 rendering)<footnote>
>> + <para>The OCCI XHTML5 rendering will be released in near
>> + future.</para>
>> + </footnote></para>
>> </listitem>
>> </itemizedlist>
>>
>> @@ -74,10 +77,10 @@
>> <section>
>> <title>Contributors</title>
>>
>> - <para>The following people have contributed to this
>> document.</para>
>> + <para>The following people edited this document.</para>
>>
>> <table>
>> - <title>List of contributors</title>
>> + <title>List of editors</title>
>>
>> <tgroup cols="3">
>> <thead>
>> @@ -102,7 +105,7 @@
>> <row>
>> <entry>Sam Johnston</entry>
>>
>> - <entry>Australian Online Solutions</entry>
>> + <entry>Google</entry>
>>
>> <entry>samj at samj.net</entry>
>> </row>
>> @@ -110,11 +113,32 @@
>> <row>
>> <entry>Thijs Metsch</entry>
>>
>> - <entry>Sun Microsystems - RESERVOIR project</entry>
>> -
>> - <entry>thijs.metsch at sun.com</entry>
>> + <entry>Sun Microsystems - RESERVOIR project, Platform
>> + Computing</entry>
>> +
>> + <entry>tmetsch at platform.com</entry>
>> </row>
>> -
>> + </tbody>
>> + </tgroup>
>> + </table>
>> +
>> + <para>The editors would like to thank the following
>> contributors:</para>
>> +
>> + <table>
>> + <title>List of contributors</title>
>> +
>> + <tgroup cols="3">
>> + <thead>
>> + <row>
>> + <entry align="center">Name</entry>
>> +
>> + <entry align="center">Affiliation</entry>
>> +
>> + <entry align="center">Contact</entry>
>> + </row>
>> + </thead>
>> +
>> + <tbody>
>> <row>
>> <entry>Gary Mazzaferro</entry>
>>
>> @@ -122,6 +146,22 @@
>>
>> <entry>garymazzaferro at gmail.com</entry>
>> </row>
>> +
>> + <row>
>> + <entry>Shlomo Swidler</entry>
>> +
>> + <entry>Orchestratus</entry>
>> +
>> + <entry>shlomo.swidler at orchestratus.com</entry>
>> + </row>
>> +
>> + <row>
>> + <entry>Michael Behrens</entry>
>> +
>> + <entry>R2AD</entry>
>> +
>> + <entry>michael.behrens at r2ad.com</entry>
>> + </row>
>> </tbody>
>> </tgroup>
>> </table>
>> @@ -161,7 +201,8 @@
>> <section>
>> <title>Full Copyright Notice</title>
>>
>> - <para>Copyright (C) Open Grid Forum (2009,2010). All Rights
>> Reserved.</para>
>> + <para>Copyright (C) Open Grid Forum (2009,2010). All Rights
>> + Reserved.</para>
>>
>> <para>This document and translations of it may be copied and
>> furnished to
>> others, and derivative works that comment on or otherwise
>>
> explain
>
>> it or
>> =======================================
>> --- /docs/ogf_template.xsl Thu Jan 14 05:30:01 2010
>> +++ /docs/ogf_template.xsl Tue Jun 1 03:24:17 2010
>> @@ -20,28 +20,34 @@
>> <xsl:param name="chapter.autolabel"> 1 </xsl:param>
>>
>> <xsl:param name="section.autolabel.max.depth"> 4 </xsl:param>
>> -
>> - <xsl:param name="shade.verbatim" select="1"></xsl:param>
>> +
>> + <xsl:param name="shade.verbatim" select="1" />
>>
>> <xsl:attribute-set name="xref.properties">
>> <xsl:attribute name="font-family">serif</xsl:attribute>
>> +
>> <xsl:attribute name="font-size">8pt</xsl:attribute>
>> +
>> <xsl:attribute name="font-style">italic</xsl:attribute>
>> </xsl:attribute-set>
>> -
>> +
>> <!-- line breaking in verbatim -->
>> +
>> <xsl:attribute-set name="monospace.verbatim.properties">
>> <xsl:attribute name="wrap-option">wrap</xsl:attribute>
>> +
>> <xsl:attribute name="hyphenation-character">\</xsl:attribute>
>> </xsl:attribute-set>
>>
>> <!-- borders for tips and warnings-->
>> +
>> <xsl:attribute-set name="admonition.properties">
>> <xsl:attribute name="border">0.5pt solid black</xsl:attribute>
>> +
>> <xsl:attribute name="padding">0.1in</xsl:attribute>
>> </xsl:attribute-set>
>>
>> - <!-- general use sans-serif font-->
>> + <!-- general use sans-serif font-->
>>
>> <xsl:attribute-set name="root.properties">
>> <xsl:attribute name="font-family">sans-serif</xsl:attribute>
>> @@ -103,7 +109,8 @@
>> </xsl:attribute-set>
>>
>> <!-- temporary in there for para numbering -->
>> -<!--
>> +
>> + <!--
>> <xsl:template match="para[parent::section or parent::chapter]">
>> <fo:block xsl:use-attribute-sets="normal.para.spacing">
>> <xsl:call-template name="anchor" /> @@ -147,7 +154,7 @@
>> </fo:block>
>>
>> <fo:block>
>> - <xsl:text>Jan. 12, 2010</xsl:text>
>> + <xsl:text>Jun. 1, 2010</xsl:text>
>> </fo:block>
>> </xsl:when>
>> </xsl:choose>
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