[Nsi-wg] framework doc with edits

[John Vollbrecht]

Hi Guy -

I finished editing the framework.  I inserted a number of comments that if we get an editor may be helpful.  I also note a few issues that need to be changed, including the pic that we talked about earlier this week.

See you soon.  I will go through the connection doc on the way over and get it to you Monday hopefully :)

John



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