[Nsi-wg] comments on NSI draft

[John Vollbrecht]

Guy -

Attached are comments on the NSI doc.  They are in a word doc and organized by section.  I highlight the section, then make comments.

My take is that the doc taking shape well.  There is still a bit of work to be done - I am hoping we define the work at meeting tomorrow and that these comments are helpful in that discussion.

See you tomorrow --

John


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