[Nsi-wg] edits for v 0.8

[Petr Holub]

> Attached are some small edits and comments for V 0.8.  I think that if the pics 5 and 9 I sent
> earlier can be incorporated somehow that this seems good to release.

A few more comments and edits from me based on John's version. Most
of them are concentrated around Section 3.

Petr

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                           Petr Holub
CESNET z.s.p.o.                       Supercomputing Center Brno
Zikova 4                             Institute of Compt. Science
162 00 Praha 6, CZ                            Masaryk University
Czech Republic                     Botanicka 68a, 60200 Brno, CZ 
e-mail: Petr.Holub at cesnet.cz               phone: +420-549493944
                                             fax: +420-541212747
                                       e-mail: hopet at ics.muni.cz

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