[Nmc-wg] [ogf nmc-base svn commit] r10 - /

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Author: zurawski
Date: 2010-01-27 07:20:20 -0600 (Wed, 27 Jan 2010)
New Revision: 10

Modified:
   messages.tex
   nmc-base.pdf
Log:
Fixing a minor error in section 4, adding more comments to address.

-jason



Modified: messages.tex
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--- messages.tex	2010-01-15 13:20:22 UTC (rev 9)
+++ messages.tex	2010-01-27 13:20:20 UTC (rev 10)
@@ -51,6 +51,18 @@
 \item \textbf{Data} - Serves a dual role: in request messages this \textbf{MAY} be empty (e.g. this is a \textit{data trigger}, it lets the service know we need action on the accompanying metadata), or it \textbf{MAY} contain dynamic measurement data or even other metadata elements
 \end{itemize}
 
+% XXX jz - 1/27/2010
+% 
+% A comment from Inder:
+%
+% 2. In Section 4.1, page 7
+%    a. I understand the concept behind "rejected outright" but it will good to
+%       elaborate what that means like "message is discarded and an response
+%       sent with a corresponding error message".
+%
+%
+% The above text should be altered to address this.  
+
 Simply stated, we are sending a request (either partial or complete) to a capable service to perform some interactive behavior.  We are interested in having the service verify that it \textbf{MAY} or \textbf{MAY NOT} be able to service our request.  We are interested in either setting or retrieving information on this target data set - subsequent operations may be required.  When the service receives this request it will check for several things:
 
 \begin{itemize}
@@ -78,7 +90,7 @@
 \end{verbatim}
 \normalsize
 
-Note this message is similar to the response in many ways. The major differences:
+Note this message is similar to the request in many ways. The major differences:
 
 \begin{itemize}
 \item \textbf{Message Type} - This becomes the foil of the previous request; it is common to simply replace the word ``Request'' with ``Response''.

Modified: nmc-base.pdf
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