[jsdl-wg] JSDL Schema Doc

[Andrew Stephen McGough]

All,

I'm sat on a train so a perfect time to comment on the document...

1) Figure 1 is great now - though it isn't referred to in the text. 
Perhapse at the end of the paragraph beforehand: "Figure 1 illistrates 
places where a JSDL document may be used within a Grid environment. It 
should be noted that the JSDL document should not be limited to just 
these situations as many others may exist.".

2) First paragraph of section 3: Last scentence:

Many of these languages are currently undefined though _they_ are 
required for the submission of jobs.

3) Page 8: Job Policy Thus -> This.

4) Page 8: Workflow: Incomplete scentence:
 Many other groups within (and without) the GGF.  -> Many other groups 
witin (and without) the GGF are already working within this area.

5) Section 3.1 has an [add more text here] element.

6) Page 24: Example of a MoutSource

The filesystem "HOME" must have at most 10GB capacity. The execution 
system is free to choose an appropriate MountPoint since no value is 
provided. This should mount the NFS export sputnick.ggf.org:/home/steve

<jsdl:FileSystem name="jsdl:HOME" >
  <jsdl:Description> Steve's home </jsdl:Description>
  <jsdl:MountSource>nfs:sputnick.ggf.org/home/steve</jsdl:MountSource>
    <DiskSpace>
      <UpperBoundedRange>10737418240.0</UpperBoundedRange>
    </DiskSpace>
    <jsdl:FileSystemType>jsdl:normal</jsdl:FileSystemType>
  </jsdl:FileSystem>

7) my email is now just asm at doc.ic.ac.uk

That's probably enuf for now.

steve..

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