[graap-wg] Minutes from Oct. 26 telecon

[Toshiyuki Nakata]

Hi:
Thanks to Stephen's word document (which I mostly followed but have
categorised some more in the Discussion group)
I've categorised Stephen's comments into 39 Grammatical ones and 19
Discussion ones.

Hats off to Stephen for a really detailed checking (And it must have
taken time to put them as comments with Page number line number etc.)

The attached excel book has two sheets one for discussion and one for
grammatical / expression wise corrections.
I've also changed the Public Comment Format somewhat.
1)Finally found out how to use a hyperlink in excel so that the page can
be referred to by just clicking on the title.
2)Decided to include all the contents in the excel sheet rather than to
have to follow the link which results in
larger volume in the table but should be quicker to refer to. (Makes 1)
somewhat unnecessary..)
3)Will be distributing them in excel rather than in html format as you
can browse more quickly with excel than with html.
If anyone has problems, please let me know.

I've also edited the draft document to reflect Stephen's "grammatical"
corrections (The ones I marked as tentatively done in the excel sheet) .
I will send the tentatively revised version
to the co-chairs (and to Stephen) so that the co-chairs can put it in
Grid-Forge
as a tentative-correction draft that
people can look into. (The numbers there are Stephen's and not my excel
based numbers).

I would suggest the authors look into it and see if they agree to the
corrections and point out the ones
they'd like to see otherwise in email rather than disccuss it on the
telecon.


One burning question.
"37. Page 27, Section 4.2.6.3.1 Importance, first paragraph, second line
Remove spurious “;”.=>Couldn't find it. Perhaps you mean the comma after
"therefore"?

Best Regards
Toshi
PS I had intended to put some of my knit pickin on the list as well but
probably should first send them to the Public Comment?
PPS I'll never try to paticipate in a teleconference with a cold and an
unclear head again :-)
Stephen M Pickles wrote:

>All,
>
>1.) In case it helps Toshi to complete his action,
>I've attached a word document containing the comments I
>posted to the WS-Agreement public comment tracker,
>and I've indicated the items that _I_ think might require 
>discussion.
>
>2.) In what timezone(s) will the meetings be one hour
>earlier? I ask because in today's telcon of GGF compute area
>chairs (which started at the same time as the GRAAP telcon),
>we thought it would be a good idea in future to hold the compute
>area telcon (which will be held on the last Wednesday of each
>month) half an hour earlier to avoid clashing with the GRAAP
>telcon. So if we do that, will we just be ensuring that we
>clash again next month?
>
>Best wishes,
>
>Stephen
>
>
>
>
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>>-----Original Message-----
>>From: owner-graap-wg at ggf.org [mailto:owner-graap-wg at ggf.org] 
>>On Behalf Of Jim Pruyne
>>Sent: 26 October 2005 16:39
>>To: GRAAP-WG
>>Subject: [graap-wg] Minutes from Oct. 26 telecon
>>
>>          Minutes from October 26 '05 Telecon
>>
>>Attendees
>>---------
>>
>>Jim Pruyne
>>Toshi Nakata
>>Heiko Ludwig
>>Asit Dan
>>
>>Discussion
>>----------
>>
>>- Let's move the meeting time one hour earlier because of daylight
>>  savings time in the US and EU.  We'll do that starting next week.
>>
>>- The URL for the public comments has been sent out.
>>
>>- Toshi to group the large comment list from Stephen Pickles into the
>>  grammar ones vs. the ones that require discussion.
>>
>>- Managing the responses could be handled a little more formally, so
>>  we should be more clear on exactly what to be posted in a reply on
>>  the public comment tracker.
>>
>>- There was some concern at GGF that people could not tell how we were
>>  making decisions.  Heiko proposes that we make our process clear in
>>  an e-mail to the mailing list.  Jim will do this.
>>
>>
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Toshiyuki Nakata 中田　登志之
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