[graap-wg] updated draft

[Karl Czajkowski]

Jim has kindly posted version 12 of the draft, including comments and
revisions by me. The comments emphasize my concerns about the existing
presentation and content of some sections.

The revisions attempt to add the extensibility needed for Jon's
signature problem (without actually defining any signature-related
syntax) and the "async" interfaces.  I also removed the Terminate
operation.  I am sure there are presentation problems and
inconsistencies, but hopefully this is a more concrete basis for
further discussion of these proposed changes.

Please ignore the appendix entirely.  The main sections are intended
to be normative and the appendix is unknown older content that I did
not touch.


karl

https://forge.gridforum.org/projects/graap-wg/document/WS-AgreementSpecificationDraft.doc/en/12


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Karl Czajkowski
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