[glue-wg] VOTE by 7/31: GLUE 2.0 LDAP Rendering release for public comment

[Florido Paganelli]

REJECT.

Reason: I think some of the comments from Stephen require a fix before
submitting the doc.

Thanks Stephen for the nice corrections in the text.


Major comments (MUST fix before approval):

- LDAP Schema should be in an Appendix B, and not copy pasted after
Appendix A. Otherwise is very misleading; the reader might thing that
the schema is community specific, but is not. We put a lot of energy in
keeping it generic enough.

- Appendix A might require references to documents/websites as pointed
  out by Stephen. I think this makes it a serious document.
  Please Stephen or Maria, David provide references for gLite and GOCDB
  where comments from Stephen point it out.

  I can provide references to such documents for ARC:
  Page 16, Appendix A, paragraph 1:
    ARC (http://www.nordugrid.org/arc)



minor comments (not preventing approval):

- Page 10, section 3.7, the sentence

  "For example, a <strike>GLUE2</strike>ComputingEndpoint entry..."

I noticed that GLUE2 has been removed. However an "entry" is an LDAP
entry for me, and that's why I kept the GLUE2 prefix. Since is written
in Italic, that should be a model /Entity/. There is no major problem
leaving it like that. The document does not define any typesetting for
LDAP entries.
A more complete sentence would be:
" For example, a <italic>ComputingEndpoint</italic> entity would be
realised as an LDAP GLUE2ComputingEndpoint entry  that consists of..."

- Page 17, bullet 2),

typo: there is an R at the beginning of a paragraph that should be removed.


Cheers,
Florido

On 2014-07-23 17:00, JP Navarro wrote:
> GLUE Working Group:
> 
> As agreed to at OGF 41.
> 
> By July 31, please review the following document and reply with a vote to APPROVE or REJECT to release for public comment.
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> 
> If you have minor editorial corrections or improvements, please reply and attach your change tracked edits and appending your initial to the file-name. 
> 
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> 
> JP and Shahbaz
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