[glue-wg] VOTE by 7/31: GLUE 2.0 LDAP Rendering release for public comment

[Navarro, John-Paul F.]

Florido and GLUE WG,

I've applied the changes you recommended and accepted all changes Stephen has made.

http://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13326?download=

Please review and reply indicating if your ACCEPT the newer version or have other suggestions.

Everyone else, please reply with your ACCEPT or REJECT so that we can move on and submit it for public comment.

Regards,

JP

On Jul 29, 2014, at 8:15 AM, Florido Paganelli <florido.paganelli at hep.lu.se> wrote:

> REJECT.
> 
> Reason: I think some of the comments from Stephen require a fix before
> submitting the doc.
> 
> Thanks Stephen for the nice corrections in the text.
> 
> 
> Major comments (MUST fix before approval):
> 
> - LDAP Schema should be in an Appendix B, and not copy pasted after
> Appendix A. Otherwise is very misleading; the reader might thing that
> the schema is community specific, but is not. We put a lot of energy in
> keeping it generic enough.
> 
> - Appendix A might require references to documents/websites as pointed
>  out by Stephen. I think this makes it a serious document.
>  Please Stephen or Maria, David provide references for gLite and GOCDB
>  where comments from Stephen point it out.
> 
>  I can provide references to such documents for ARC:
>  Page 16, Appendix A, paragraph 1:
>    ARC (http://www.nordugrid.org/arc)
> 
> 
> 
> minor comments (not preventing approval):
> 
> - Page 10, section 3.7, the sentence
> 
>  "For example, a <strike>GLUE2</strike>ComputingEndpoint entry..."
> 
> I noticed that GLUE2 has been removed. However an "entry" is an LDAP
> entry for me, and that's why I kept the GLUE2 prefix. Since is written
> in Italic, that should be a model /Entity/. There is no major problem
> leaving it like that. The document does not define any typesetting for
> LDAP entries.
> A more complete sentence would be:
> " For example, a <italic>ComputingEndpoint</italic> entity would be
> realised as an LDAP GLUE2ComputingEndpoint entry  that consists of..."
> 
> - Page 17, bullet 2),
> 
> typo: there is an R at the beginning of a paragraph that should be removed.
> 
> 
> Cheers,
> Florido
> 
> On 2014-07-23 17:00, JP Navarro wrote:
>> GLUE Working Group:
>> 
>> As agreed to at OGF 41.
>> 
>> By July 31, please review the following document and reply with a vote to APPROVE or REJECT to release for public comment.
>>  http://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13302?download=
>> 
>> If you vote to REJECT, please summarize your concerns.
>> 
>> If you have minor editorial corrections or improvements, please reply and attach your change tracked edits and appending your initial to the file-name. 
>> 
>> Regards,
>> 
>> JP and Shahbaz
>> 
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