[fi-rg] Comments to our latest document

[Ralph Niederberger]

Hi Thijs,

are there any news concerning our second document?
Public comment phase has been 30 days as far as I remember.
Did you tune the text according to Gian Lucas comments as you anounced?
And did you change the text and reference according to my last mail?

best regards

Ralph

Ralph Niederberger schrieb:
> Dear Thijs and all,
>
> I have converted the text referenced on page 4 into English, so that we
> can change the text here from
>
> "A market overview of high speed firewalls (as of August 2006) can be 
> accessed
> at the D-Grid project web page [D-Grid]."
>
> to
>
> "A market overview of high speed firewalls (as of August 2006) can be 
> accessed
> at the "Internal Reports" web page of Forschungszentrum Jülich [D-Grid]."
>
> In the Annex the reference should be changed to:
>
> [D-Grid] M.Meier, E.Gruenter, R.Niederberger, Th.Eickermann,
> High-speed Firewalls: A Market Analysis, D-Grid Integrationproject FG 
> 3-5,
> Forschungszentrum Jülich, August 2006,
> http://www.fz-juelich.de/jsc/files/docs/ib/ib-08/ib-2008-06.pdf
>
>
> Best regards
>
> Ralph
>
>
>
>
> Thijs Metsch schrieb:
>> Hi,
>>
>> Thx for your reply, I'll tune the text a little bit according to 
>> your  suggestions.
>>
>> Have a good one,
>>
>> -Thijs
>>
>> On Sep 11, 2008, at 11:54 AM, Gian Luca Volpato wrote:
>>
>>  
>>> Dear All,
>>>
>>> I have spent some time reading and reviewing our latest document  
>>> "Requirements on operating Grids in Firewalled Environments". My  
>>> opinion is that the outcome is very good and will represent a solid  
>>> ground for the work to be done in the newly created FVGA group.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Just some small remarks, mainly editorial issues that I prefer to  
>>> discuss in our group rather than writing them in the OGF web form:
>>>
>>> - page 1: the numbers of the chapters is wrong. It goes from 1 to 4  
>>> and then starts from 2 again.
>>>
>>> - page 2, section 1: why should the last paragraph ("Some  
>>> application use ..." ) not be considered as a 4th category of grid  
>>> applications, i.e. the category of the applications which use  
>>> obscured dynamic ports?
>>>
>>> - page 4, section 2.1: here we reference a paper from the D-Grid  
>>> project that is written in German. The paper itself is a good  
>>> information source, but is it OK to provide reference written in a  
>>> language other than English?
>>>
>>> - page 10, section 2.7: the paragraph after Figure 5 says that  
>>> incoming SOAP messages are decrypted before entering the gateway  
>>> system. Which component performs the decryption? How can this  
>>> component access the key used for the message encryption?
>>>
>>> - page 11, section 2.7: is it possible to reformulate the 3 bullet  
>>> points at the beginning of the page? The sentences within  
>>> parentheses look like comments from the author. The message to be  
>>> conveyed is clear, but it is expressed in a very short form.
>>>
>>> - page 15 and 16, Glossary: we provide explanations for 3 terms 
>>> that  are never used in the document: DWDM, GPFS and IPSec. 
>>> Shouldn't we  remove them?
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Kind regards
>>> /Gian Luca
>>>
>>>
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