[fi-rg] FI-RG current document #1

[Ralph Niederberger]

Dear all,

next version of the document.

I added some text concerning comments from Raju Shah, to make things
clearer (see page 34).

I also added his spelling and grammar corrections throughout the text.

I started to write an acknowledgement section for my own, but am still
waiting for an acknowledgement chapter from FI-RG chair.

best regards

Ralph


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 Ralph Niederberger

 Research Center Juelich
 Central Institute for Applied Mathematics
 John von Neumann Institute for Computing
 D-52425 Juelich

 Forschungszentrum Jülich GmbH
 Zentralinstitut für Angewandte Mathematik
 John von Neumann Institut für Computing
 D-52425 Jülich

 Tel.: +49 2461 61 4772
 E-Mail: R.Niederberger at fz-juelich.de


----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Ralph Niederberger" <r.niederberger at fz-juelich.de>
To: "Ralph Niederberger" <r.niederberger at fz-juelich.de>; 
<imonga at nortel.com>; <Fi-rg at ggf.org>
Cc: <mshore at cisco.com>; <raju at force10networks.com>
Sent: Tuesday, June 06, 2006 2:27 PM
Subject: [fi-rg] FI-RG current document #1


Dear all,

as mentioned last week I worked on our document #1.

I corrected a lot of typos, worked on readability and
comprehensibility.

I added a chapter on AccessGrid and included an use case
table for AccessGrid in the appendix.

Additionally I included remarks from Melinda.

Open points see email from last week below.

Best regards

Ralph

P.S.: Hi Raju, here is the current doc file.

**************************************************

 Ralph Niederberger

 Research Center Juelich
 Central Institute for Applied Mathematics
 John von Neumann Institute for Computing
 D-52425 Juelich

 Forschungszentrum Jülich GmbH
 Zentralinstitut für Angewandte Mathematik
 John von Neumann Institut für Computing
 D-52425 Jülich

 Tel.: +49 2461 61 4772
 E-Mail: R.Niederberger at fz-juelich.de


----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Ralph Niederberger" <r.niederberger at fz-juelich.de>
To: <imonga at nortel.com>; <Fi-rg at ggf.org>
Sent: Monday, May 29, 2006 1:40 PM
Subject: [fi-rg] FI-RG current document #1


Dear all,

as I already announced several times I would like to
finish our first document at least before the next GGF
meeting in Washington (including publication phase).

Until now I did not get any additional contributions.

I am just preparing an additional use case "Access Grid",
to provide an example for multicast usage. Does anyone
have/know about another multicast use case. If there are
no mandatory additional use cases, I would like to close
this chapter and come to an end.

Has someone had a look onto the glossary section?
Any additonal entries needed? Any errors found?

What about the acknowledgements section? (Inder, Leon, you
agreed to prepare one.)

In the header section we always had GWD-R, I think this has
to be changed to GWD-I (I for "informational", not R
for "recommended"). Later on another change to "GFD-I.nn" is
required.

Any other comments.

As soon as we have finalized the document, we should go into
public comments phase.

Best regards

Ralph

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