[DRMAA-WG] Updated DRMAA spec for your review

[Rajic, Hrabri]

Thx Peter,

Great comments!   Here is updated version.

All,

Please provide corrected sentences (or parts) text, so we could tune the
modifications faster.

Regards

	Hrabri

>-----Original Message-----
>From: Peter Troeger [mailto:peter.troeger at hpi.uni-potsdam.de]
>Sent: Wednesday, August 29, 2007 5:29 AM
>To: Rajic, Hrabri
>Cc: drmaa-wg at ogf.org
>Subject: Re: [DRMAA-WG] Updated DRMAA spec for your review
>
>Hi Hrabri,
>
>thanks for the work. Here are my comments:
>
>General comment:
>
>	I would suggest to use consistently the terms "Proposed
>Recommendation (GFD-R-P)" and "Grid Recommendation (GFD-R)",
>according to GFD.1.
>
>"This document supercedes GFD-22 OGF document [GDF.22]"
>
>	The reference should be [GFD.22]
>
>"It is an updated version of the  original document, based on the
>feedback from four independent DRMAA implementations as documented in
>the OGF Experimental documents."
>
>	I would list them up with references, since we have official OGF
>document numbers for three of them.
>
>" Listed drama_w* routines parameters with parameter comments."
>
>	Spelling error.
>
>"Explicit listing of all error codes at the end of routines"
>
>	I would state this as "Explicit specification of all error
codes",
>which was identified as basic need by the implementors. The spec
>became more precise here.
>
>I would also list up the tracker item numbers, just to the express
>the amount of work invested:
>
>* Explicit listing of all error codes at the end of routines. (1171 -
>1172,1175 - 1178, 1180 - 1181, 1783 - 1184, 1186 - 1191 )
>* Explicit and more self-sufficient text of the API semantics. (5884,
>5882, 1786, 781, 1126, 1040, 1400)
>o Clarification of the multithreading issues. (1174, 1793, 5879)
>o Much detailed explanation about job reaping provided. (1568, 1686)
>o Clarification of control routines behavior for sets of job. (1173,
>1683, 1357)
>o Clarification of drmaa_w* routine semantics. (1125)
>o Listed drama_w* routines parameters with parameter comments. (1125)
>* JOB_IDS_SESSION_ANY and JOB_IDS_SESSION_ALL constants definition.
>(1289)
>o Information that job submission calls are nonblocking. (5884)
>o In which attributes is the special index placeholder allowed. (5873)
>
>Another modification was the change to the OGF document template.
>
>Regards,
>Peter.
>
>
>
>Am 29.08.2007 um 07:10 schrieb Rajic, Hrabri:
>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> Here is the modified spec GFD.22 mod2.pdf, according to Steven's
>> suggestions and a fully commented text of the previous final spec
>> version, so you could scan for the spec modifications yourselves to
>> verify the new test.
>>
>> If you copy the sections of the new text in separate e-mails when
>> responding, than the comments/edits could be done in parallel.   Send
>> then to all the people, so we could  reach a quick consensus if
>> needed.
>>
>> I have put back the original authors list, plus the maintainer to
make
>> it consistent with the old version.
>>
>> If you could provide the comments by 4pm or earlier my time today,
>> so I
>> could do the modifications and engage Steven that would be great.
>>
>> Greetings
>>
>> -Hrabri
>>
>> <ggf-rec-drmaa-1_0-2nd_stage_final_comments.pdf>
>> <GFD.22 mod2.pdf>
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