[DFDL-WG] DFDL Spec Working Draft r29

Tue Oct 6 18:23:32 EDT 2020

Perfect. Sent you a meeting invite for that tme slot.

Mike Beckerle | OGF DFDL Workgroup Co-Chair | Owl Cyber Defense |
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On Tue, Oct 6, 2020 at 7:34 AM Steve Hanson <smh at uk.ibm.com> wrote:

> Mike
>
> I've completed the review.   To speed things up, are you around this
> Thursday at the usual DFDL WG call time (4pm UK) and we can go through the
> new comments (section 9.4 onwards)?
>
>
>
> Regards
>
> Steve Hanson
>
> IBM Hybrid Integration, Hursley, UK
> Architect, *IBM DFDL*
> <http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/library/se-dfdl/index.html>
> Co-Chair, *OGF DFDL Working Group* <http://www.ogf.org/dfdl/>
> *smh at uk.ibm.com* <smh at uk.ibm.com>
> tel:+44-1962-815848
> mob:+44-7717-378890
> Note: I work Tuesday to Friday
>
>
>
> From:        Steve Hanson/UK/IBM
> To:        Mike Beckerle <mbeckerle.dfdl at gmail.com>
> Cc:        DFDL-WG <dfdl-wg at ogf.org>
> Date:        01/10/2020 18:28
> Subject:        Re: [EXTERNAL] [DFDL-WG] DFDL Spec Working Draft r29
> ------------------------------
>
>
> Mike
>
> Good review session on the WG call today.
>
> Updates to comments made during the call added.
>
> [attachment "gwdrp-dfdl-v1.0.5-r29-changes-tracked-SMH-comments.odt"
> deleted by Steve Hanson/UK/IBM]
>
> Regards
>
> Steve Hanson
>
> IBM Hybrid Integration, Hursley, UK
> Architect, *IBM DFDL*
> <http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/library/se-dfdl/index.html>
> Co-Chair, *OGF DFDL Working Group* <http://www.ogf.org/dfdl/>
> *smh at uk.ibm.com* <smh at uk.ibm.com>
> tel:+44-1962-815848
> mob:+44-7717-378890
> Note: I work Tuesday to Friday
>
>
>
>
> From:        Steve Hanson/UK/IBM
> To:        Mike Beckerle <mbeckerle.dfdl at gmail.com>
> Cc:        DFDL-WG <dfdl-wg at ogf.org>
> Date:        01/10/2020 15:53
> Subject:        Re: [EXTERNAL] [DFDL-WG] DFDL Spec Working Draft r29
> ------------------------------
>
>
> Mike
>
> Have reviewed up to start of 9.3.  Comments added. Note I used
> LibreOffice.  We can start going through them on call today if you like.
>
> [attachment "gwdrp-dfdl-v1.0.5-r29-changes-tracked-SMH-comments.odt"
> deleted by Steve Hanson/UK/IBM]
>
> Regards
>
> Steve Hanson
>
> IBM Hybrid Integration, Hursley, UK
> Architect, *IBM DFDL*
> <http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/library/se-dfdl/index.html>
> Co-Chair, *OGF DFDL Working Group* <http://www.ogf.org/dfdl/>
> *smh at uk.ibm.com* <smh at uk.ibm.com>
> tel:+44-1962-815848
> mob:+44-7717-378890
> Note: I work Tuesday to Friday
>
>
>
>
> From:        Mike Beckerle <mbeckerle.dfdl at gmail.com>
> To:        DFDL-WG <dfdl-wg at ogf.org>
> Date:        29/09/2020 23:29
> Subject:        [EXTERNAL] [DFDL-WG] DFDL Spec Working Draft r29
> Sent by:        "dfdl-wg" <dfdl-wg-bounces at ogf.org>
> ------------------------------
>
>
>
> Steve H., and DFDL Workgroup,
>
> I have uploaded version r29 of the DFDL spec as MS-Word ".docx"
>
> This has all the comments from the external review by Martin Westhead
> applied to it, including numerous forward references fixed. In general the
> material flows better (IMHO) and is better organized with a number of
> out-of-place discussions/paragraphs repositioned to be in a better place
> with other related material. I believe this is a substantially better
> document now.
>
> I have tried to mark the moves of sections of text with comment bubbles.
> I'm sure there are some missing however.
>
> Not every comment bubble is resolved as yet.
>
>    - Comment bubbles marked TBD mean a change is still expected or an
>    issue to be resolved. Some of these are calls for new material such as new
>    clarifying examples, and we may or may not decide to put them in.
>    - Comment bubbles marked "Note" are FYI for read/review and may not
>    involve any further change. Basically, it says "Note" if I currently think
>    the issue that motivated the change has been resolved, but you may have a
>    different opinion.
>
> You will find two variants of the document: one has MS-Word change
> tracking, the other has all changes accepted. When sections were renumbered
> I had to turn off MS-Word change tracking. So you'll notice that even in
> the track-changes version, renumberings are (mostly) not marked as tracked
> changes.
>
> It is my hope that after another read-through the renumbering and
> reorganization are accepted and we can go forward from here using the
> all-changes-accepted version, though I realize in review it may be
> important to see what text has been deleted/inserted via the change-tracked
> variant.
>
> It is also my hope that we are getting close to a draft ready for public
> review.
>
> Saving reviewer/proofread time is the most important thing, so you may
> print it out, and redline it with red ink if you wish, and ship the result
> to me via courier/fedex. Or if possible you can PDF it, and can virtual
> red-ink it with a tablet computer/stylus, and e-send the PDF to me. This is
> the model Martin Westhead used when reviewing, and it worked well for me.
> But basically, I will accept feedback/review in any form: MS-Word comment
> bubbles are fine, as is red-ink on paper.
>
> One possibly useful technique: If you open the "tracked" variant in
> MS-Word, and from the review tab, choose "Simple Markup" as the change
> display mode, you will get just margin side-bars marking where changes are,
> and the comment bubbles, but otherwise not too much change noise. You can
> click on any given sidebar and it will switch to "All Markup" mode showing
> you the detailed tracked changes, but you can switch back to "Simple
> Markup" after reviewing the details.
>
> I have started keeping these files on the OGF Github under
> docs/working-drafts, they are also on redmine in the current documents.
>
> OGF Github DFDL repository has URLs:
>
> *https://github.com/OpenGridForum/DFDL.git*
> <https://github.com/OpenGridForum/DFDL.git>
>
> or if you prefer ssh:
>
> git at github.com:OpenGridForum/DFDL.git
>
> Redmine the two docs are:
>
> *https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13621?download=*
> <https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13621?download=>
> *https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13622?download=*
> <https://redmine.ogf.org/dmsf_files/13622?download=>
>
> -mikeb
>
> Mike Beckerle | OGF DFDL Workgroup Co-Chair | Owl Cyber Defense |
> *www.owlcyberdefense.com* <http://www.owlcyberdefense.com>
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