On Mon, Nov 16, 2020, 2:07 PM Karl <[1]gmkarl@gmail.com> wrote:

   Here's a type-up of the remainder before I got off track.  I'm having
   amnesia shortly after thinking of my ideas right now.
   #9
   panel 1:
   Scene: Boss's Office
   Boss (hooked up to medical computer) imagining.
   Imaginary Worker: "Boss, we're blatantly mind controlling some people
   in communities that could track mind control."
   Imaginary Boss: "WHAT???" <Imaginary Worker explodes into disrespected
   cigars and burnt dollar bills>
   Imaginary Boss (to Imaginary Worker 2): "Let me know when this trash
   has been cleaned up."
   Imaginary Worker 2 (admiring Boss): "Definitely."
   panel 2:
   Scene: Human Experimentation Room 1
   Surveillance cameras monitor all surfaces and substances.  Tapes fall
   out of them onto a conveyor belt that goes to a Post Box and a Mobile
   Phone.
   Human Experimentee (clump of ad-hoc body parts and microcircuitry):
   "Purple string worship log definitive!"
   Computer Display: "From Boss: heal a problem with influence being
   observed"
   Human Experimentee 2 (radically different clump of ad-hoc body parts
   and microcircuitry):  "Upload surveillance footage to blockchain for
   organ healing!"
   Computer Display: "Crowd control: take trash out to enhance certainty
   of 'Boss's memories reserve's"

   I'm surprised I never fixed this.  "take trash out to enhance certainty
   of 'Boss's memories preserved'"
   Reading through some of these, it's also notable that I was forgetting
   the story some as I was writing, and some characters got reused in
   other roles and stuff.  I noticed there were three janitors, meant to
   have only one janitor.  Janitor is a down-to-earth guy who can solve
   everything when nobody else can because he doesn't think like a
   billionaire or even prioritise profit.  He represents the rebel workers
   who influence the businesses, who do so differently from the rebel
   researchers, vivisectees, and outmoded investors.
   And of course this stuff is mostly just a way for me to handle
   dissociated experiences by analogy and all.  Seems like it's going to
   try to be a story somehow though.  We certainly have the technology to
   make it happen.

References

   1. mailto:gmkarl@gmail.com