[caops-wg] Version 06-09 of the OCSP document.

[Viljoen, MJ (Matthew)]

Hi

Here are some minor changes you may want to consider making in the
document.

All the best
Matt


Abstract
...or otherwise invalid certificates from *being used*.

...OCSP services must be discoverable, fault tolerant and *have* low
latency.

2. Introduction
...for relying parties to perform revocation *checks on* certificates...

3. Practical Considerations and Expectations
...presents a *scalability* problem...

3.1 Certificate Revocation Lists
...somewhat like *a trusted* responder)...

7.1.2 OCSP Clearing house
In order for such a service to be *trustworthy*...


9 Other Considerations
(I feel the first sentence is rather clunky - perhaps something like the
following is better)
While OCSP as a technology has been around for several years, *it has
yet to make a significant impact to the Grid community.*




On Wed, 2006-03-22 at 18:11 +0100, Oscar Manso wrote:
> Dear all,
> We attach the last review of the document in the usual formats. 
> .doc with track changes and .pdf with all the changes being accepted.
> A summary of introduced changes can be found at the end of the document.
> We would like to remind Milan to introduce his contact data.
> 
> 
> Oscar and Jesus


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