[acs-wg] Review item: Chapter 1+2

[Keisuke Fukui]

Folks,

This is the revised version after the review in this week's
meeting. Although I think I have more to do on this, I
present it to let you review the recent improvements.

  -Keisuke

Keisuke Fukui wrote:
> Folks,
> 
> I have modified and removed obsolete descriptions in the Chapter 1
> for the review tomorrow. Some comments are inserted also.
> 
>  -Keisuke
> 
> 
> Keisuke Fukui wrote:
> 
>> 4. Review of the proposed draft for the chapter 1 and 2
>>    in the draft 0.53.(15 min)
>>     - Chapter 1. Introduction
>>     - Chapter 2. Requirements

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